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Letters To Your Editor by ~silentlydrowning:iconsilentlydrowning:





Let's make up silent situations
So we'd have a reason to fight
If that's the only way to feed our ADD
Then let it be so;
I love your body, but you talk s o  s l o w l y
Like you're bored out of your hell;
Mixed signals on the traffic lights and
Here we go, crash again;
This bed is soft, but let's use the floor
And make acquaintances with
Unfamiliar body parts;
Sex is on the loud speaker
But you don't dare touch the sound;
Time is of the essence
And this line is impatiently backing up
We're waiting on you
Trying to initiate a spark
You reciprocate the flame;
Just give me something to linger on to
Something to keep staying for
I'm losing what I grasped as forever
Fuck 'Forever' and 'Love Always'
In childish, giddy love notes with blacked out hearts;
Let's just make this worse
By feeding on each others anger and mutual pity;
Speak up and kiss with honesty, honestly,
With your signature slipping through the dotted lines;
Let's never be spiritually attracted to each other again
Let's never be supposedly in love again
Let's never try this intellect mumbled from unwilling and annoyed mouths
I'm only attracted to your body now
The rest of you bores me so
Now, how was your day again?
©2005-2009 ~silentlydrowning
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Author's Comments

Not-too-old poem I forgot about and recently dug up. I found it to be deviant material....Enjoy.

**2009 Update: AH HA! Now I remember what this was about! This was about my waning attraction to my first boyfriend. We would always call each other and have nothing to say. The phone would go cold with silence. It got so frighteningly eerie that I just wanted to start fighting with him so we could at least have something to talk about. Then he called me selfish for not asking how his day went. Talk about your teenage melodrama! I'm pretty sure there are a plethora of girls at that stage in their relationships. Remember, it can only last so long when you don't open your mouth. Please enjoy!

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:iconluciditystudios:
Simple, rambling, as if the thoughts aren't fully formed when they tumble from his lips...

Ya, I like :-)

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I love the ending.. it makes me think of my ex, Yahyo.. He was so beautiful in my eyes, then the infatuation with his mind dulled out so quickly and I found myself merely lusting for him.. I could never be in that kind of relationship though.. simply lusting.. There has to be mental connection too, ya know? Argh.. I feel blah.. *goes to bed* good poem btw :) -Kia Lola

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:iconwannabeemokid:
Fully developed the stream of conscience/thought. Nice.
:iconbrandowilly:
i lik eit . its like someone tlaking and singing at the same time to someone.

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:iconsilentlydrowning:
Haha, that's because it is my darling! Thank you! :)

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Thank you MCC! :)

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Why, thank you kindly! :)

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Thank you, darling Kia, one for understanding and two for the beautiful comment. When you give your heart to someone for so long and then it just dies, it just tastes so bitter when it ends. Thank you, again. :)

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